this is my writing if you were a dog in ww1

I would smell a scent of gunpowder on the ground and the other dogs scent .I hear BOOMING noises from the front of the battlefield and people shouting ATTACK ! .I see dogs (I'm an attack dog) lining up to attack and the scorching sun from the desert . I can feel the heat and the pressure from going to war. I taste victory and ashes from the fallen.